Tuesday, November 9, 2010

If I take my son to the mall

   If I take my son goes to the mall, he'll probably buy some shirts. When he gets some shirts, he'll ask for some pans to wear with the shirts. After he has some pans, then he'll probably need a pair of shoes. When I buy a pair of shoes, he'll ask some socks. After he has all this, he'll need a beautiful coat. Then he tries them onl, he'll look in a mirror. If he looks the mirror, he might think he  need a hat. I'll buy him a hat, he'll need some gloves.
       After we finished shopping,  he'll be tired and hungry. I'll take him to the Macdonald's, he'll ask for the hambuger. When he has a meal, he'll ask for something to drink. When he get a coke, he'll need a straw. When he's finished, he'll go to restroom. When I take him to the restroom, he'll wash his hands. After he washed his hand, he'll ask for paper towel to dry his hands. Then we come back, he'll need to go home. When we get home, he'll take a nap. If he takes a nap, he'll probably go to bed late at night. If he go to sleeps late, he won't get up early the next day. If he doesn't get up on time, he'll miss the bus. If he's late for the bus, he'll miss the class. If he can't go to school, he'll want to go to the mall.

1 comment:

  1. FANTASTIC!! So clever. I am going to share this with the class! Very fun writing, Amy!

    Make sure you match subject and verb: he'll need (not needs) he'll take....
    and use future EVERY time: when he is finished, I'll take him,

    spelling: McDonald's, need

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